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Lookit Achiru's sound-effects-o-doom!! >>; Okay, :iconshinerai: critique away. It's CALLITH!! [link]

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:iconshipuh:
are you planning to do ALL of these in color? @___@;

or is this like the special inserted colored pages?

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:iconlenoir-whittlethorn:
OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOO! TT3TT i can't do advanced critiquing! *panics* oh! um yes, the paint job is awesome! and your sound effects are fine! i can imagine the sound! :D so no worries there! tho the fire is kinda..weak looking? *panics* I don't know! it's great! :XD: i love the last panels! the effect of him falling! :D it's a great cliffie! whooo! two in one day! you're on a roll! :D wheeeee! it's all good! plz continue! :XD:

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:iconehme:
And he falls!! It looked like he was about to do a cannonball in one of the panels. I like the flames. SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM. At least he didn't get flamed. That reminds me of this show where at this one country there was roasting bats. Poor bats. >>;

Wheeeee! Its looking really nice so far. Continue. Too bad I didn't see the previous beginnings for Raven. I missed out. @__@;
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Um... planning. Dunno if it will be.

-Achiru-
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It's encouraged, not required.

I don't think I can finish the two pages per day anymore. I'll probably slow down now >>; Thanks!

-Achiru-
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CANNONBALL!! :XD:

Yeah, he got flamed. Just barely. I can't have a story if I burn up my main character within the first three pages here.

Poor, poor bats.

-Achiru-
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I might re-post the old versions for fun someday in the future after I'm sure that I'm actually sticking to a version. =D

-Achiru-
:iconlenoir-whittlethorn:
*sighs* but now i must mature in my commenting skills! *goes into serious but goofy stance* Time to level up! lol yeah i figured as much. the pages have a lot of work put in them i see. take your time. i shall look forward to them! you're welcome! :XD:

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:iconehme:
Yeah, that reminds of the time where someone announced the name of an episode and the title says the main character dies (even though you know they're not) and most people fell for it and were like "HOW COULD YOU SPOIL IT FOR ME STUPID!!!" And stuff like that. Though he could have died, but then he got saved. It wasn't even far in the series. XD;; I wonder if dragons find Zy tasty anyways.. :o

I guess Raven ll and Xie ll won't get to be in this.. And if they do probably not until the end. I was just curious but, do you have a plan what it will end like? Um.. Do I spew out a bunch of questions too much?
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OMG THAT PERSPECTIVE IS BADASS D: Lookit you made Callith all intimidating, having his wings spread like that. So awesomes. As for Zy.... that sucks.. D: Poor Zy...In any case. XD You dre Callith realy good! :D The only thing I'm noticing is maybe you should put some shadow at the base of them so it looks more like they're on his back and theyre not his arms? I dunno XD But man, I'm in love with his face <3

As for the fire looking weak- (reads all your comments) I don't think it does :E And I like how it kinda rolls off the cliff at first. So cool :'D Then Zy falls out of it, oh noes D: Oh... well... I guess that's better than him staying in the fire :'D

(favs) :D!!

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Just kidding. This one is better and not evil D:

I collect ref sheets GIVE THEM TO ME D:

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